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Old Art work By me

Sinn

Well one of my old drawings. Until I get my damn Scanner up this all I have for the mean time.

Comments are welcomed the more the better so I can improve. My style is always changing to experiment!

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hooligan2k3
Apr. 17th, 2003 08:36 am (UTC)
That's your... OLD artwork? Yipe! That's flat out gorgeous!
twilightfenix
Apr. 17th, 2003 09:12 am (UTC)
:: giggles:: Thanks!

Yeah I took a few art classes in college and stuff=D
nemoel
Apr. 17th, 2003 08:36 am (UTC)
Wow!
The drawing is great! I had no Idea that you hat that kind of talent - else I would have spent tiem with you pouring over art when I lived in Dallas!

Since you asked for critique:
The only thing that really bothers me is the size of the left hand. . .. A hand is roughly the size of the face of a drawing. Because you have the hand in the forground and the head in the middleground you can affort to have the hand just a LITTLE bigger than the head - but that shouldn't be able to be seen by an untrained eye or someone without a ruler. Generally it just 'looks right'. You did a great job on her face and I can't pic because of the style of the piece, The clothes are also great, just remember that 'there is a body underneath the clothes' - and unless it's a matariel that holds it's own form, you can always see the form through the clothes. Follow the definition lines and curves. In this case take a closer look at the waist.

Hope this is of some help, and I wish I could simply scan some of my pieces in, however, most of mine are bigger than my desk and my scanner just couldn't handle it. Maybe I will try takign a digital photo of it at some point.

Nemoel
twilightfenix
Apr. 17th, 2003 09:01 am (UTC)
Re: Wow!
YAY!!! That helps me out a lot.. Yeah that is one of things I hate about it too.. that and I feel her waist is too narrow.. :shrugs: But I am working on a few more pieces I am hoping to post on my site all of them or something =D

:: huggles:: !!!
xkookykrysx
Apr. 17th, 2003 08:57 am (UTC)
wonderful. I always loved that one :)
kangitanka3
Apr. 17th, 2003 03:04 pm (UTC)
Coolies!
That has long been one of my favourites of yours! :~D

I agree with Nemoel about the left hand, though.

Love,
~~Kt3, In Awe of Artists~~
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twilightfenix
Apr. 17th, 2003 08:17 pm (UTC)
Re: Your drawings...
Sure post away I could use a good laugh at my old stuff =D
xundesiredlovex
Apr. 21st, 2003 11:55 pm (UTC)
i came across your journal randomly. your artwork is beautiful. keep it up.
twilightfenix
Apr. 22nd, 2003 04:51 am (UTC)
Thank you very much!

Phoenix
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