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Sep. 9th, 2005 03:43 pm (UTC)
two parts
First: the CONSTRUCTIVE comments (note the capital letters, not to complaints. you mentioned you wanted more complete responses)
- the chin is just a bit too narrow compared to the size of her face. May just be a style thing, but just kind of stands out.
- her left shoulder looks like it's dislocated. It just floats out too much to the front.
That's all.

Second: Compliments!!!
- great color choices. the violet color for her dress is great and the feathers stand out nicely against her hair.
- excellent detail on the wings on the boots.
- the "flame" writing in the background is great. The end on the left looks like a dragon's head, very cool.

Just wanted to give you a full response, instead of my usual fanboy praise ;) But great job as always.
Sep. 9th, 2005 07:02 pm (UTC)
Re: two parts
Thank you very much for this I was looking at a few things you said.. I well the chin is a style thing but I can see what you are talking about. The shoulder.. EKK!! well I will work on that in the future lol

Sep. 9th, 2005 07:09 pm (UTC)
Re: two parts
glad to help
Sep. 9th, 2005 08:56 pm (UTC)
I LIKE this one. Well done!!
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